Eayle Celanil

First Name:
Eayle

Last Name:
Celanil

Character Age:
20

Species:
Human

Gender:
Female

Force sensitive:
No

Home World:
Nar Shaddaa

Languages:
Galactic Basic(understands most common languages).

Appearance:


Skin:
Female GA Trooper

Faction:
Fen'Tar Empire

Rank:
Private (3rd Class)

Inventory:
-Commlink
-Datapad
-Translator Device

History:
Eayle was walking through the street when she heard gunfire from behind a building, She quickly hid herself by a crate nerby.
She sneaked up to the building and looked on the other side where three imperial troops were firing at some people.
All their shots hit right between the eyes, and before long they were nothing but a bunch of corpses.
Trooper 1: Well, i guess were all done with the smugglers...
Trooper 2: Yeah, For now.
Trooper 3: Let's go back...
As the three troopers turned Eayle hid herself behind the crate again and watched as the three troopers walked away. Suddenly she felt a hand on her head.
Unknown: i saw the look in your eyes... You were deeply impressed... was it by their accuracy?
Eayle looked up and saw an old hooded man standing over her.
Old Man: Few people have such accuracy as them...
Eayle: Who were they?
Old Man: Imperial Troopers... though they were more skilled than most i have seen!
Eayle wanted to become an imperial trooper like the three troopers she had just seen...
At the age of 18 she decided to join the Empire. She worked hard and improved her skills a lot. and became a cadet before long. she stayed a cadet for a year and a half continuing to work as hard as ever. And after half another year, was promoted to a private at the age of 20. Eayle is now still working hard and improving her skills pursuing a dream to become one of the Best.

Since this is not a jedi i figured i might not need to create a big bio, but just tell me if i need to make it bigger.

To be honest, this is as big as any bio needs to be. Nice first char.